Wow Careasa!
What a beautiful, touching poem! You are a WONDERFUL,
GIFTED WRITER!
I know the feeling well - of being afraid to write my
thoughts down - fearing each word is silly and s*@t!
But your words touched me deeply = I was there with you
watching the tumbling pieces of leaves fall - and the
iron sky - and the fear of the memories of the past and
the distraction from the beauty of the moment to the
angst of those feelings.
Keep writing. It can heal you, save you, and move us
as well.
Marguerite