Great subject. Sometimes it really does seem as if everything has just dried up and fizzelled away and even the desire to worship at all can leave...but isn't it amazing how when you take the first step to offer that sacrifice and it is a sacrifice at that point of Praise how quickly his light comes bursting into our souls reviving and refreashing and the next thing you know you couldn't contain the praise it is just an absolute torrent pouring forth.
I liked your poem very much. I think that you could make this poem really great with another once over.